Alone I am, there stood the crowd,
with thoughts I never agree,
facts that is lost with
the fastness of maddening crowd.
Alone I am, there stood the crowd,
customs being changed,
love tending to be materialistic,
care shown as part of rhythm;
that beats at regular interval.
Time flew away with loving hearts,
replaced then with stone walls.
Alone I am, there stood the crowd,
when I believed, time will heal;
gap just deepened after every beat.
Lost track of world, where
life was meandering me to.
But knew the things happening,
were not the one I wanted to.
Alone I am, there stood the crowd,
I searched for souls who
believe in my thoughts.
But met a few who lost hope,
and some who never knew,
also saw few who still;
thinks this is the way the world works.
Never did I lose hope,
I kept telling them,
what a false frame we are in.
But my words flew above head,
which is lost in the world’s trend.
Alone I am, there stood the crowd.
with thoughts I never agree,
facts that is lost with
the fastness of maddening crowd.
Alone I am, there stood the crowd,
customs being changed,
love tending to be materialistic,
care shown as part of rhythm;
that beats at regular interval.
Time flew away with loving hearts,
replaced then with stone walls.
Alone I am, there stood the crowd,
when I believed, time will heal;
gap just deepened after every beat.
Lost track of world, where
life was meandering me to.
But knew the things happening,
were not the one I wanted to.
Alone I am, there stood the crowd,
I searched for souls who
believe in my thoughts.
But met a few who lost hope,
and some who never knew,
also saw few who still;
thinks this is the way the world works.
Never did I lose hope,
I kept telling them,
what a false frame we are in.
But my words flew above head,
which is lost in the world’s trend.
Alone I am, there stood the crowd.
Comments
I like the way you put out your words, though Im no profession poet, I belive you cud come up with more changes. Or probably that is just your style.
And oh btw., Its better to stand alone, afar from the crowd than to rather get crushed into it.
Cheers,
NY?
Thanks for visiting my blog. Naanum etho mood vantha ezhuthuven I am not at all professional in this.
Can I blogroll U???
@golmaalgopal
nandri hai :-)
keep ur good work... :-)
Lijin
nice poem . The third para is damn good:)
why suddenly u polambifying that world should not be like this nu... nature parthalo, illa love panninalo kavidhai varumpa... edhu edha kandu penathals? ;)
As Shyamala says,
"nature parthalo, illa love panninalo kavidhai varumpa..."
Seems so true...werever u fit it, fans r growing for ur poems... KEEP GOING, bud!!!
ur blog title
"Jagamum naan Ahamum naan"
&
sub-title
"Always had a penchant towards my name "Janani" So wanted atleast a hint towards it in my title"
They are harldy visible on my PC... do u wanna apply some dark colors for them???
Thats a lovely poem Janani! But y the false frame we r in? Is it really false? or only for few ppl or the way we see it?
Thanks for visiting my blog, hope to see you around.
No no thats dangerous....
@Serendipity
Danks yaar
@Syam
Poem by heart panni ezhutha sonna kastham thaan brother. Ithu sondha saraku....
@Shyamala
Nalla thaan de irukken. Ithu ethaiyum parthu vara poem ille. Vetti special.
@Manoj
Thnks for comments. I changed my template. Probably that may be the reason
@HTBM
Nandri hai.
@KK
Ithu unnum periya vishayam ille. Epd ezhuthinalum athu poem agum. But few rearragement of words, then gramatical mistakes elam irundha it can be declared as a poem ;)
@Bricktop
Thnks.. Yeah I know the reason my dear bro.