Friend
Sometimes it's hard to write the words
That you, my dear, should see.
Or say the things that you need to hear,
Or be as I should be.
You grow so fast and learn so much
It's hard for me each day.
To say or do just what is best,
To help along the way.
Should I be silent or give advice
Should I answer yes or no
Should I have control - set many rules,
Or simply let you go
One thing is certain...I'll make mistakes,
And some will seem hard to mend.
But if nothing else seems clear right now,
Know that you can always count on me as your friend.
That you, my dear, should see.
Or say the things that you need to hear,
Or be as I should be.
You grow so fast and learn so much
It's hard for me each day.
To say or do just what is best,
To help along the way.
Should I be silent or give advice
Should I answer yes or no
Should I have control - set many rules,
Or simply let you go
One thing is certain...I'll make mistakes,
And some will seem hard to mend.
But if nothing else seems clear right now,
Know that you can always count on me as your friend.
Comments
:-))
so is this called "expert" writing??? I never understood the poems fully in our "Main course English text books"
oh my god.... u becoming an expert??? ;O
Whats the stroy behind the poem? You tell me yours and I'll tell you mine.
Interesting lyrics. This poems stands out to differ from your usual style. Lovely.
Cheers,
NY?
Good lines Janani!
And some will seem hard to mend.
//
Simply Superb Janani! You can write poems very frequently Janani
Thanks bro :-)
For once you have added up the first comment
@Chakra
Aha.. Ithuku epd ellam smilies draw pananuma???
@Bricktop
Thanks anna :-) I am good enough to write posts about financial developments. Etho ennaku therinjathu
@Seshadri
Thanks da. Finally I find onw who speak about understanding. Sighhhhhhhh
Nee kuda than comment podara nu nala kozhappi irukke.. Ithu elam arasiyal le sagacham appaa..
Btw thanks for the comments :-)
@Who!me?
Many of my friends support me when I am deep in troubles. It's not that every day you keep telling them how important they are. So just a tribute from my side.
@Phani
Just a amatuer person. Nothing more :-)
@Barath.m
Yaaru pa nee???He..he..just kidding da... Will write da. Unaku kandipa kidaikum.
Note:Timeline not been specified
@மு.கார்த்திகேயன
I am in cloud nine. Thanks for the amazing comments.
i loved all lines in the last para.
well done. keep poeming :)
nice one...keep goin...
lovely poem!
Danke Arun.
@Golmaalgopal
Thanks.. Why no updates from ur side???
@Standbymind
Thanks for visiting :-)
And thanks again for the comments.
Do keep visiting